2005/06/10 | Talking about myself
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From now on, I will be coming here to write diary or message in english. Of course I may make many mistakes, at the same time I will correct it below this essay.I will appreciate friends who help me correct it.They are very kindness and lovely.

Talking about myself

My english name is chris. Now I live in NanJing but it is not my home town. My hometown lies in the north of JiangSu province. Though I have worked for five years in Nanjing, I do not like it at all.I came here to study in high school in 1997. Now I am working for a big firm. On weekend I enjoy reading or shopping.I am not married.
My hobby is traveling, but I always have no time to journey. I hope I can have a free job or have many time to do what I like in the future.


Correction:
Tomorrow is Dragon Boat Festival, Bless you! Below I wrote a message: introduce me to you (better use "my introdution to you", or, "a brief introduction of me")

My english name is chris. Now I live in NanJing, but it is not my home town. My hometown lies in the north of JiangSu province. Though I have worked for five years in Nanjing, I do not like it at all. I came here to study in high school in 1997. Now I am working for a big firm. On weekends I enjoy reading or shopping. I am not married.
My hobby is traveling, but I always have no time to journey ("journey" is usually a noun, better use "travel"). I hope I can have a free job or have many (much, time is non-accountable, so you can't use "many") time to do what I like in the future.

please help me correct it, 3Q (this is not a standard abbrevation for "thank you", as in English 3 is pronounced as "three", pls use the correct form)! Best wishes to you!

Best wishes to you too. You see, you don't make many mistakes. I'll say that your English is good, it's just that you need more practice, and more reading.

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