2005/06/18 | Reading Provides Necessary Servival Skill
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Last Saturday, I had read a article, the topic is Reading Provides Necessary Servival Skills.The writer emphasized the use of good reading habits in our everyday life as a necessary life skills.
For students, All studying involves reading. For working adults, it can help us gain a smooth path to opportunity and build our vocabularies.Slow readers often lose their concentration and comprehention because their minds will wander out of boredom, while fast readers are the best readers.
Our minds will keep up with our readings speed if we ask it to. We can challenge our understanding and make it easier for our minds to concentrate on the text, if we are always read at our top speed.
In a word, good reading habits can help students and working adults alike to be more successful.

Revised:
Last Saturday, I read an article(here use just "read", past tense), the topic was Reading Provides Necessary Survival Skills.The writer emphasized the use of good reading habits in our everyday life as a necessary life skill (not "a ... skills", or use just "as necessary skills").
For students, all studying involves reading. For working adults, it can help us gain a smooth path to opportunities (better use plural form) and build our vocabulary (usually we use single form of word "vocabulary", because it's a collective noun集体名词). Slow readers often lose their concentration and comprehension because their minds will wander out of boredom, while fast readers are better readers. (you compare just 2 categories, so not necessary to use "the best")
Our minds will keep up with our reading (here, not plural form) speed if we ask it to. We can challenge our understanding and make it easier for our minds to concentrate on the text, if we always read at our top speed. (no "are read")
In a word, good reading habits can help students and working adults alike to be more successful.

Well done! You sure can write good passages, keep your efforts, and I look forward to reading more of your writings.

Mandy
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